Writer’s Digest

17^th Annual International Book Awards
Commentary Sheet

Author: Tom Kirkbride
Title: Book I, Gamadin — Word of Honor
Category: Genre Fiction

Judge's commentary:

What did you like best about this book?

The opening line of Book I, Gamadin—Word of Honor is so powerful, there was no way t could stop reading. Tom Kirkbride's description of setting is vivid and allows readers to see colorful, three-dimensional images. He does a beautiful job with characterization, with powerful internal conflict and motivation. ' External conflict is evident from the first page. Each chapter ends on a hook, which will compel readers to continue all the way to "the end." Using some real life settings provides a nice backdrop to establish bearings. The back cover copy is intriguing and compelling. I appreciate the author bio inside the back cover.

How can the author improve this book?

There isn't much change about this book because it is powerthlly and skillfully written. The, front cover is attractive and eye catching₊ but I would like to see the author's name in a bolder font so it can be seen from a distance. Fans of series fiction will look for his name. There are many places where this book can be marketed. Science fiction clubs and organizations would be a good place to start. Offer to speak to these groups as well as libraries and bookstores. An online presence with a website (interactive and constantly changing), a blog, and online social networking are natural marketing tools for this series.